Three-Minute Fiction Round Three Contender: Abandonmen "Your first piece, Abandonment," the reporter from Artbeat said, "can you tell us how that idea came to you?"
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"Your first piece, Abandonment," the reporter from Artbeat said, "can you tell us how that idea came to you?"

The young woman's pen stood straight up, like a lone soldier on a battlefield, Claire thought. And those eyes: so trusting. She wanted to tell her the truth. That she'd merely left her copy of The New Yorker lying open on the table to fetch some cinnamon for her latte, and when she returned, a forty-ish, vaguely Mediterranean-looking man in a cream jacket was raving at her empty table.

"Oh, this," he said to her, "I love this. I absolutely love what you've done."

Claire studied her open magazine on the empty table and wondered what she had done.

"What you've got here is incredible," the man went on. "Just incredible."

Claire was an open person, honest to a fault. She'd only lied once, in seventh grade, and the experience had been so traumatic she'd never again told a serious lie in her life. So she was surprised, and even slightly exhilarated, when a counter-intuitive idea flew into her head and, against her instincts, she followed it.

"Thank you!" she said. "I'm glad you like it!"

"Jorge Sachs," the dark man in the cream jacket said, fishing a card out of his jacket. Of the gallery on Avenue B, surely she had heard? Claire nodded: Of course. The current show was wrapping up, and he hadn't seen anything he loved. But this, he said. Could she bring a few things by, say Tuesday? He said some other things, enough for Claire to get an idea of what was going on.

"Of course it won't have the same impact in the gallery," he told her, "Work like this never does." He touched her elbow and leaned in, but kept his eyes on the empty table.

"It was so smart to do this as a performance piece," he whispered. "Just brilliant."

Claire enlisted her friend Julie with the promise of a bottle of chardonnay, and they agreed on Saturday. It was easy, actually. The ideas just came to them. Nothing On consisted of a television on a small stand, playing an endless loop of the first season of The Real World. Shopping Bores Me was a men's flannel shirt from American Apparel on an otherwise empty rack. John Updike Lied to Me, their best idea, was a battered copy of Rabbit, Run lying face down on an end table.

"Well, here's where I'm exposed as a fraud," Claire said cheerfully, as she and Julie carried the items into Jorge's gallery. But he loved her work. Loved it. He gestured. He gushed. He told stories from his last trip to Venice. "You must see Venice," he told Claire. "Promise me you will." He also fixed outrageous prices to her work, and promised her a 50-percent commission.

And in this way, everything had slowly gotten completely out of hand. So she wanted to confess to the reporter, she really did. But she also knew that now was not the time. The opening was going so well, a respectable crowd of beautiful people chatting so enthusiastically, and Jorge had been so supportive and kind. And there was Julie, in the corner of her eye, talking to a tall man Claire had overheard say something about a hedge fund.

And so she smiled to the reporter, and said the words that already struck her as routine.

"I was just thinking about the disaffection of my generation," she began, "and the idea of ennui..."